This week I was learning to make up poems about animals that show assonance and use the correct homophones for Their,there and They're. I learnt how to make a amazing poems showing assonance .
My next step is to learn about alliteration and include it in my poems.
Well done Huriliegh you achieved the learning intention in writing this week. I like how you are using the Smart Learner Framework when you post your work. My feedback is about how your work is presented. That font is a bit hard to read. You did well being technical support for assembly too
Well done Huriliegh you achieved the learning intention in writing this week. I like how you are using the Smart Learner Framework when you post your work. My feedback is about how your work is presented. That font is a bit hard to read. You did well being technical support for assembly too
ReplyDeleteHi I am Nathan. I like how you used animals in your poem. Could you try to make a Dinosaur poem?
ReplyDeleteHi nathan I will try to make one. Thank You for the comment. Blog you later
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