Persuasive Writing

Persuasive Writing

Against Music

I really  believe that having a music is very out of hand. Every year people have to write a new song every year. Being in a music interest stream is very hard . Especially when you have to make new song every week, month and year. If you make money that’s a good thing. If you make more than 5 songs they will go viral and people would want to buy them.

The first reason why I think music should not be in music interest stream is because if you go in the recording room you are flat but when the background music is in you won’t go flat.  That’s why I think that music is not good.It is a time to put music beside.

The second reason why I think music should not be in the music intrest stream is because people wouldn’t know what to write about. Every time people make songs is because they might be stressed or they need to write something. Some people take drug when they are writing  and taking there video’s. So making music is very bad for little one’s  especially if it has drugs  stupid videos and half naked people. Even swear words should be not allowed on tv.

The last reason why we should not have music is because you might take drugs and die. That will be a lesson to everyone in the world to stop making music.

We will just have the good song from good people

Conclusion we should not have bad songs on T.V.

Sports	Music
Healthy	Meet People
Discipline	Travel around the world
Educational	Learn new things
Friends	Education
Sports	Music
Heart attack	Drug and P taking  like 2pac Mikara Jackson Amy Winehouse
Can’t do it because they got a medical certificate.	Death
Ali Williams  taking drugs and was in a car crash	Ending up in jail
Can’t be bothered