My Character Portrait

WALT: write a descriptive paragraph of a character

using all of their senses to include exciting verbs, colourful adjectives, and similes and metaphors.

Success Criteria:

• have used the framework to describe a character
• have used  all of the senses
• included exciting verbs, colourful adjectives, and similes and metaphors.
• have four paragraphs to describe my character.

TE WATENE MAEHE NGARAHU PAI KEREONE

Watene is a terrific brother in the world. He has dark black hair like my dad. He loves our family. He can speak maori to my Nan, Papa and our cousins. I am close with my brother.

   

Watene is always  terrific to my family. He gets excited when my Mum and Dad has lollies to share with the family. He jumps up and down and chucks the pillow on the wall. My brother laughs like me and I laugh like him.  Sometimes my brother smiles like a sad puppy. The corners of his mouth is turned down.  

He is so funny when he shoots the gun. He has a great way of shooting birds. When he runs, he runs like the wind in the sky.