Here is my Term 2 writing assement

One hot sunny morning we went to the plaza next door. When we got there it was cool inside that the sun was burning us.
When my uncle Davis turned up Aue,Jaden,Jahyah,Pepe,piggy and Shiloh came inside with some Kia. There was Potato salad, Roast meat and pizza.
When we finished a Kia we had another Kia we had Boil lup and friy beard( it was nice).
When we finished Me,uncle Davis,Pepe,piggy,Waaka,Kelly went on the van and went to Aunty jahleay’s house. When he dropped us off he went to go get the other at mummy baku’s house.
We had to wait for 10min before they came. When the van got here I went to get my swimming clothes out of my bag! O no we is my bag!!!!! Going in the van looking for my bag BUT there it was under the other bags.
When I got it out I got out of my clothes and hopped into my swimming clothes.
First when I hoped in the pool I done a BOM it was cold.
When we were in there we had a swimming race. The race was who ever dose the most is the winner. So we started to swim from the top to the bottom. Uncle Davis done the most.
When we were swimming Riha came running outside. Riha said ‘ Shiloh locked in the toilet’ and then every one was running to the toilet and saving her. When she got out she was crying hard out. Then it was Kia we all hoped out of the pool and went for a feed. We had potato salad,Otalen sauce, and meat every one like every thing on the table.
Then the sad part came leaving to go to Melbourne where my nan’s sister lives.
Kissing them goodbye and taking photo.
Going to Melbourne.

Here is my number knowledge

My Goals Term 1 2016

We learn't to use Creative Commons website to find the author of a photo. I used my own photo today

Today in class we revisited the Kawa of Care, here is my group's comic we made.

My Book Review

Molly’s Moon

This Term I've been reading Molly's Moon. The Author is Georgia Byng.The book is mostly about Molly Moon she  looked down at her pink,blotchy legs. This is manly about Molly hypnotising people so they can have blotchy legs and a head rush.

My favourite part was Molly hypnotising them. It is funny because Molly was making them slow at down some thing and they were hypnotised

What do you think about this book ?

Cow kaka fight Daft 2

Daft 2 What I need to work on next: I need to use interesting words in my story and checking that my sentences make sense.

Having a kaka fight.

WARNING: This might offend some people One day long ago at the farm we done something gross.
Kelly walked to the road were my Brother and Sister to go talk with them across the road on the other side.


When they were talking me,Alice and Maraea walked down the road next door to Davis and them.

When we got there ‘Davis said’ ‘ What do yous want’ ‘We reply To get Kelly so he can go for a shower Nana said’. Then Thomas picked up a pile of kaka and chucked it to us.

Then we had a kaka fight we picked up wet one’s and dry one’s. When I pick some kaka up I chucked it to Poppy’s night cote then she came RUNNING WITH KAKA to try and get me but Thomas got me with wet cow kaka. When Maraea got some she chucked some kaka to Kelly and Davis. ‘ It was funny’.

When I finished that I went I went home and jumped in the Barth tub.
‘It was nice and cold’. Then Maraea,Alice and Kelly came back and jumped in the sea shell tube it was cold too.

That day was amazing i'll never forget it.